~Wolfdog

Okay well since there was such a great response from everyone (15 people said they're read it) I have decided to carry on with Outcast in prose format.
Sadly, I have left my notes for the rest of chapter 3 at home, so I'll only be able to start writing that next week. I had some good dialogue that explained things well so if I can find those notes I'd rather use them than start from scratch. So I started typing up chapter 4 a little and am releasing an excerpt to show my writing style, for people that read my journal. Please bear in mind the text below would probably have been uh I dunno 3 comic pages or so? Imagine how long that'd take to release at my old rate of one page every 2 weeks. Ouch!

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Lieska slouched with her back against the door, hanging her head. A pained expression showed on her face.

I wish I didn't have to do that to you.

She stared blankly at the back of her gloved hands and clenched her fists as she heard someone approaching. In this life, you have to appear strong. Hold back the tears.

“Hey Ratty!” purred a voice to her side, soon followed by Kahi grinning face. “The puppy, is he your kind of guy? Sure you don't want to.... do anything to him while he's asleep?”
Lieska glared at the tiger shifter. Even though she was shorter, she had her arm resting on the door above Lieska's head probably in an effort to appear dominant.
“I'm not like you. I felt bad enough lying to him and giving him a sleeping tablet.”
“I could have beaten him senseless for you, you know.”
Lieska sighed, flattening her ears to her head.
“Yes, well... thanks for that.” She hoped the sarcasm would show, just a little.
Kahi moved her head in closer to Lieska's face so she could smell the other woman's breath; hot and tainted with the smell of meat. “We gotta mark our property, you know. It'd be no good if he changed forms before the tattoo set, we'd just have to keep doing it!” she sneered. Lieska winced, remembering things she'd rather not remember.
“Anyway, why are you here?” Lieska scowled “I know you like to taunt me, but didn't Reg say you could have the afternoon off? Back already?”
Kahi leaned back from Lieska closing her eyes and giggling slowly with her hand placed over her lips.
“Steffi wasn't around to play, so I got bored. Daddy gave me a job to do, and you're coming with!”